The Fetts have escaped the jedi and are now on Geonosis. They are negotiating with the separatists at the droid factory. Currently they are watching three prisoners fight to the death. Also Boba was attacked by creatures outside of the city.
You need to back up a little and tell your readers what book you are reading and a little overview of the plot line. This was we can understand what you are summarizing for us. Remember that your readers have no idea what your book is about. You are the expert!
You need to back up a little and tell your readers what book you are reading and a little overview of the plot line. This was we can understand what you are summarizing for us. Remember that your readers have no idea what your book is about. You are the expert!
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